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Join date : 2012-10-29

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PostSubject: ThorGOD_1's Application   ThorGOD_1's Application EmptyMon Oct 29, 2012 8:02 pm

1.IGN = thorGOD_1
2.SKYPE = none
3.SKILLS IN BUILDING = averadge
4.OCCUPATION = farmer
5.CHARACTER AND BACKGROUND

My name is thorGOD_1 but u can call me thor for short.I live in the plains so i can farm easyly.I always find good ways to farm.
I love to farm because it easier to live u dont have to kill freindly mobs such as cows pigs and chikens.
I have a uncle named Arcoa.I am in my 20's 24 in accurate.I graduated from the school of farming the principal was Notch him self.He
thought me many things about farming.If u consider me as a farmer in your server i whould do my best to support the server with my farming skills
If u consider whould gladly help the town of Arcoa.Well thats about it this is my application
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Join date : 2012-01-23

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PostSubject: Re: ThorGOD_1's Application   ThorGOD_1's Application EmptyTue Oct 30, 2012 3:14 am

Alright, I'll be honest here. If you really want to be part of the server you will need to revise your application. The biography for your character really isn't good. The grammar needs work; but that's the least of your troubles. First off, the town of Arcoa is located in Southern Dexia, which is a desert biome...no plains there. Secondly, farming school? With Notch as the principal? There is no "farming school", most farmers would learn their trade from their parents or guardian from having grown up in such conditions. As for the Notch comment, Notch is an ancient figure, credited for the creation of the world. He isn't going to be teaching random people how to farm.

Also, for your skills in building, screenshots would be appreciated.
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PostSubject: Re: ThorGOD_1's Application   ThorGOD_1's Application EmptyTue Oct 30, 2012 1:20 pm

Avver wrote:
First off, the town of Arcoa is located in Southern Dexia, which is a desert biome...no plains there.

The northern half of Southern Dexia is plains, so there's pretty much farming space.


thorGOD_1 wrote:
3.SKILLS IN BUILDING = averadge

Post some screenshots. Dyagrothii style of building is pretty simple and easy, just ask Arcoa to teach you.
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